Yes, posting two days in a row. Let’s not get too used to that, eh?
Here’s the second of my old poems i’ve managed to excavate from the runs of yesteryear. This one was very personal, containing far more truth than one might suspect.
(Pain (Knowledge Counts) by -3- / originally published online ca. 1994)
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you make is perfect in rhymes and rhythms,
well done.
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Nice beats and rhymes…
Very well presented… 🙂
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liked the rhyme in this especially 🙂 wonderful rendering!
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Sinister and intriguing verse, really good!
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Captivating. A mystery lays between the folds. To me, this poem is thought provoking. Very well penned, with a smooth flow.
nice piece. read to me as a devotional between two lovers at their wedding.
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here is mine:
http://itistimetothinkformyself.blogspot.com/2010/11/today-i-write-it-down.html
Great structure and compelling imagery; a wonderful piece.
rhythmic and wonderful 🙂
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http://chinmay28.wordpress.com/2010/10/25/hope/
Well done! Nice throwback to ancient times. The complications of romantic relationships have existed since the beginning of time.
great job, i love the symbols
A fascinating tale about a cyclical love affair. Very fantastical. There’s a great novel here waiting to be written?
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definitely my type of poem – intermingling of history, passion, civilization, past lives… maybe if you see mine you’ll understand:
http://likewine.wordpress.com/2010/10/11/i-a-woman/
I certainly love this.
Nice 1
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